The past few days, I decided to script out and start working on a short comic with DAZ. Gritting my teeth through some program frustrations, I've managed to grind through ten panels. However, reading back over what I've got so far, I can't say I'm all that happy with it; I pushed past some obvious but persistent flubs so I wouldn't get stuck all day on one panel, but the end result is obvious sloppiness, and I already feel the need to start over from scratch visually. The script itself wasn't particularly good anyway, just a quickie to help me test the waters. So, I'm going to stop here.
That said, I've learned a few valuable things from this already, and have a better idea of what to do for a future attempt! In the interest of not wasting the pages, I shall go ahead and post what I got here, if only to give you an idea of what I can do so far.
(If you want to know the rest of the story, it's just the two girls walking around the Garden area, bantering a bit as they play with the boys on various benches throughout the area. Nothing I haven't written a dozen times already.)
